I liked that you caught new yorkers in their natural habitat. I enjoyed the shots of the fruit man and the muddy newspaper. I think the music was a little bland but you made it go well with the shots. I don't think you needed so many black outs towards the end though. Overall Great Job!
I like how this video captures what New York is. I also really liked the shots were you blacked out in certain area's according to the beat of the music.
Of the two projects that used this footage, I enjoyed this treatment better. I felt the music suited the slower, more poignant shots better. Also I like how both pieces opened up similarly, but with the music, the effect here was more peaceful than suspenseful.
I loved it we went total opposite ways i think yours came out great the choice of music really fit and i loved how you pieced it together. It was really cool working with you on this project! :)
it felt like a commercial for life insurance. i like the music and how it showed the various elements of morning life in Hunter college. I did not like the last clip, for it felt out of space.
I really enjoyed this video. It was a light hearted view of a regular day in new york. The shots were all smooth and well composed, and the music accompanied it well. The final shot was really good, I really liked it.
Very interesting. The video had a contrast between sad and hopeful that worked well, especially with the music. I thought that some of the blank shots could have been shorter, but otherwise good job.
i loved the music, i think you and Melissa di an awesome job shooting and editing, like how you was able to produce a very different project with some of the same shots. Great Job
I really loved the intermittent shots of blackness - it created a really nice pace and made me excited to see what the next shot would open up with. Also great use of continuity editing with the hand grabbing a newspaper from multiple angles. I also liked how you focused on the faces of the people you shot.
the shots of blackness threw me for a bit of a loop, but your shots and music otherwise made up a pretty great video and excellent definition of the space outside Hunter
I liked that you caught new yorkers in their natural habitat. I enjoyed the shots of the fruit man and the muddy newspaper. I think the music was a little bland but you made it go well with the shots. I don't think you needed so many black outs towards the end though. Overall Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI though the use of the music and the "black outs" in the shots was nicely used. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteI like that you had breaks in between some of your shots. It added to the significance of those shots and emphasized the people in them.
ReplyDeleteI like how this video captures what New York is. I also really liked the shots were you blacked out in certain area's according to the beat of the music.
ReplyDeleteOf the two projects that used this footage, I enjoyed this treatment better. I felt the music suited the slower, more poignant shots better. Also I like how both pieces opened up similarly, but with the music, the effect here was more peaceful than suspenseful.
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I loved it we went total opposite ways i think yours came out great the choice of music really fit and i loved how you pieced it together. It was really cool working with you on this project! :)
ReplyDeleteit felt like a commercial for life insurance. i like the music and how it showed the various elements of morning life in Hunter college. I did not like the last clip, for it felt out of space.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this video. It was a light hearted view of a regular day in new york. The shots were all smooth and well composed, and the music accompanied it well. The final shot was really good, I really liked it.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting. The video had a contrast between sad and hopeful that worked well, especially with the music. I thought that some of the blank shots could have been shorter, but otherwise good job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the contrast from your partners video. Its interesting how the same shots create a different story.
ReplyDeletei loved the music, i think you and Melissa di an awesome job shooting and editing, like how you was able to produce a very different project with some of the same shots. Great Job
ReplyDeleteI really loved the intermittent shots of blackness - it created a really nice pace and made me excited to see what the next shot would open up with. Also great use of continuity editing with the hand grabbing a newspaper from multiple angles. I also liked how you focused on the faces of the people you shot.
ReplyDeletethe shots of blackness threw me for a bit of a loop, but your shots and music otherwise made up a pretty great video and excellent definition of the space outside Hunter
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