I thought this was great! Funny, had nice cuts, and a little story to. I liked the shot of the spinning doors.
I enjoyed it, even though it was short but I like how you put your one voice narrative in the video. You have really beautiful voice :) Great idea!
The commentary is great. I agree that the splatter was scary, but the effect was a little distracting. Either way, the honest approach to the scribble we see on the walls everyday was an interesting subject to talk about.
I thought the subject and commentary was really funny, but I would have liked it if it had gone on longer. I liked that you established the bathroom first and didn't just start off with the graffiti, I felt that it gave the video context.
I like how you use audio to introduce everything to the audience and its very interesting how you shoot the words inside the bathroom and ad ur own narrative...attract audience to see more..^^
I enjoyed the added voice narrative, it helped to further differentiate your piece from just a "definition" of a bathroom. great job!
The humor was spot on. The areas where you placed the cuts and edits complimented your subject matter. It was also very relatable.