Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Defining a Space: Keiko Yara



12 comments:

  1. That was AMAZING!! i love the shots you took and i think the soundtrack is awesome! I think that the shots worked hand in hand with the music. I love when you started dancing in the stall----killing it!!

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  2. I thought it had a good story it was like watching a music video i really liked it. The shots were cool even switching from your pov to you dancing was interesting.

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  3. awesome video.......i think the most creative ive seen yet, and camera work was very symmetrical.

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  4. The song choice did not fit the first half of the video. I liked the theme that you had going on in the beginning, but I had no clue what was happening at some points. I like the spinning while holding the camera. worked very well.

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  5. I like the story you created, as if it were a music video almost. I found it interesting that you were the one in the video. I like the song choice and how upbeat it was, but how the video concept itself was very serious. Great job and great acting skills!

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  6. It definitely told a story, which was good. I really liked the one shot where the camera was spinning around to resemble the girl dancing from her perspective. I think it kind of ended abruptly though. I want to know what happens to her next! I think it's good that you ended it in suspense to make the viewers feel that way.

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  7. There was a lot going on which at first really clashed - between the music, the slow shots and the awkward pacing, but I felt it sort of came together at the end when the music picked up and the camera was spinning in the stall, and when it slows down again when the women is looking in the mirror before she dies(?!).

    -Jose <3

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  8. I thought the video and the music went along really good towards the end, when the girl started dancing and the camera was spinning.

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  9. My only suggestion would be to have a smoother ending because it seemed like it cut out too quickly. Other than that, I really loved it. I had no idea where it was going, and I didn't expect the dancing scene so that was really awesome. The shots during the dancing scene, and after, were great.

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  10. I really like the shot of the reflection in the mirror. I was a little bit confused with what was going on in the video though. Whether it was about a relationship (due to the music) or if it was about the stress of school work being too much.

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  11. Overall I think that the music was nicely used, I think some shots could have been moved to reflect the lyrics of the song better but I was a nice song choice. Also the shot of the spinning around was very clever for the emption of the video.

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