Friday, March 7, 2014

Project 1- Bathroom Suicide by Maya Shor

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jb6hSn3Ppi4&feature=youtu.be

13 comments:

  1. I liked how clear your story was! I love the song choice. I liked the angle of the shots and the use of the graffiti on the stalls to develop your idea. Great job!

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  2. That was awesome! I love how you sped up some shots to add to the intensity. And the flashes with other shots did that as well. It told the story really well and the music added to it nicely.

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  3. Interesting use of flashing. I felt it was a little too intense, though.

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  4. Very different way of showing this video than Keiko i thought it was cool i love the song it was awesome. The last shot was amazing and was a perfect ending.

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  5. i really liked the video. It had a different mood from the other one. The shots were good and the music was too. I liked the black space that you gave in some of the scenes, they fit the story line well.

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  6. I like the effect the black shots created. It was used very well to enhance the story. Your music choice was perfect and I like that the sequence went to the beat of the music.

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  7. I liked the combination of the video and the song. I also like how it was more fast paced than the other film using the same footage. The use of cutting in the black to create the flickering effect was really, really awesome. It made it super interesting to watch.

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  8. I liked the shot of her trying to reach for the emergency button. I thought that played very nicely into your story. I also liked the music, and very nice acting! Good Job!

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  9. I like how you black out the shots after she takes the pills and after she collapses. The last shot was also really great, it closed the story well.

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  10. The song complimented the clips you chose very well. I like the length of the film. It did not drag on at all. Was concise and told the story very well. The POV shots in the beginning were nice.

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  11. Very cool video, the cutting was relevant the the shot, but you gotta be careful doing tho cuz it could be disorientating, but still a really good video

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  12. Excellent use of the sped-up footage, it suits the music and subject material very well. The final shot had a sense of drama and gravity the other video didn't which I felt the subject (suicide?!) required.

    -Jose <3

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  13. Amazing narrative in the start of the video. I really liked your close up shots of the quotes in the bathroom stall, it proves that college is just another high school with a price tag.

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